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| Butterfree 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseAww, this story is just so sweet and touching... ^-^ Whenever I think of Cosmo and Wanda being reasigned to anyone else other then Timmy, it makes me deeply sad, espeically if he loses them because of age. Your story here was very intelligent and an unique idea for that sadness to be lifted quite a bit, yet not fully because we know that Timmy isn't actually Timmy Turner. I love how this one-shot seems so much of a perfect length, it almost feels like this whole thing is to be played on screen and would last exactly 15 or 30 minutes. It was a little strange to me that Timmy's background/past was revealed to Mandy so early and randomly in the story, but then I understood later on when I realized that it was a one-shoot; so when it was done was actually quite perfect. Jorgen was just a little out-of-character though since I don't think he really is that mean, espeically since Cosmo and Wanda are aparrently his 'only friends' XD. ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| Expatkiwi 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. Its a nice way for Timmy to be truly part of Cosmo and Wanda's family. Blue hair though... THAT is something worth seeing. |
| TurtleShroom 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. Now THAT is what I call a story! Keep it up! Excellent, creative, and pure genious! I can't wait to see what happens next! Hmm... if there is a fairy Timmy, would that mean that there is an Anti-Fairy Timmy too? Ooh, the suspense is killing me! THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC!! |