awwwww... this is adorable! Great job!

this was brilliant

This was so sweet!

naww, this was cute :)

So freaking cute ! (:

YAY! That was a prettyful story :)

Love it! Very cute.

Cute! Sweet! Luv it!

wowo..! its simply one of the best one shots I have ever read..! its so cute...! oove JL fics... they r soo aodrable..

Beautiful piece of work. I was like, 'this sounds funny' let's give it a shot... then I was laughing! It was light, and I say light cause I've been reading some difficult and mind wrecking psychology books . So this improved my mood after I finished one of those!

Best line: “Forgive the intrusion, Lily, dear,” he said softly. “But you’ve rather been trespassing on my property.”

Keep up the amazing work!

The only problem I have with this fanfiction is that I don't think it's likely that James would be that obsessed over his hair. I highly doubt he would yell at a girl for ten minutes just for touching his hair. It's comepletely unlikely.

Hi, i love this oone!

I am from Argentina, I am 17 and i translate some fanfics of one American wirten.

Can I translate this?

That will be great!

Answer me soon

Lal!

aww, that's so cute. i call my bf my puppy b/c i have a habbit of scratching his back when he's laying down. weird i know.

LOL loved it! So cute. My boyfriend's hair is soft too. But I bet it's not as good as James's. Sorry Jake :P

This was surprisingly cute. I don't think I've ever met a guy who obsessed with his hair that much but it suits James. Write more! Write more!