This good! People should read it more!

I'll comment here, if you don't mind, because I'm more interested by the Abe/Miha than the Abe/Mizu (though the later was very nice to read too ^^). Oh dear, Mihashi-san = love. I can so picture her acting that way, wanting to hit Abe with a plate when he grabs Ren's wrist with his gruff and forceful attidue (which we know is only an attitude - Abe can be quite the softie too :p ) , which makes it even funnier.
And Mihashi waking up in surprise, frantic, is Abe's name mentionned. Pure love ^_^