Excellent story, well written, nicely descriptive, all characters in character, wonderful work! :-)

you are my kind of h/c writer - keep it up

Lovely writing, and you've certainly got Jack's character correct. The 'hurling insults' line was typical O'Neill. I especially liked how you were able to write Teal'c so perfectly, he can say so little and still convey the deepest thoughts. Great writing.

Love the story. You captured the uniqueness of SG-1 well.
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Good story.

This was very good.