Oh, poor Jack. Everyone likes to beat up on him. But then I love to read it. I have to admit I love Jack whumping. Very well written and I thought you did a good job with the characters. I liked it.

Wonderfully angsty! Riveting! Wow!

Chilling and insightful and so very well written. You have to write more Stargate stories, please, you're so very good at them. This story made my skin crawl at the way Jack recalls his memories of Iraq, and how he's lost his safety net of Charlie and Sara. It's nice that he's still got his team. Well-rounded writing of all the characters, but your interpretation of Jack is incredibly insightful.

Wow. Just wow. How can I explain how unbelievably awesome I found this story to be? Perfect characterization of Jack. He would do that for the team and I enjoyed the snippets of his time in Iraq. Amazing. One of my favourite stories I have read on here.

Kate

Nice story and well written. Thanks for sharing.

What a story. He is always there for them and they are there for him.
:-)

Excellent story!!

Very Nice!
Love me some Jack Whumping,
He always saves them.
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