Liked it, waiting for more.

Haha. I'm not surprised The Duke had an idea of what that meant since I'm sure Jet wasn't exactly the quiet type about such affairs. (I can picture Jet talking about it a DINNER TABLE even! *sweatdrop*)Poor poor Haru. I like this story the writing is a good balance of fluff and drama.

lol
bu-sy
u don't say^^
update yea~!

zomg! too **' funny!

hahaha
LOLOLOL "They're what?!" poor Haru

hehehe i only read the first two lines. Did anyone else catch soka's unintintional sexual induendo? i think its called a induendo.

I'm still reading your story. I read it again today_but I left a review on chap 3 today and 4 and 5 the other days i read it. so i had to leave a note here. It's been about 5 months since your last update-i hope you're not giving up on this story_it's so good-i've read it several times since last november and i find more appreciation for your story telling talent with every read. i also pick up more on the characters' emotions and motivations-your sokka and zuko are really building up something very special between them_When you wrote them making love for the first time it was so great. even though zuko was doing the penetrating; sokka was on top in control. i like how you had zuko think that it made them equal partners and that he would not have had their first time any other way. I put my self on the story alert so i won't forget about it...i hope you don't forget about it. i know real life sometimes kicks you in the **=and you just don't have time for extra stuff like fan fiction. so i hope you're doing well-and that when you are able-that you will gift us with some more of your story telling of "Dressed in Red". I can't wait to find out how Katara reacts to sokka's new relationship_and how sokka will defend his 'zuky' (love that name). When you had sokka think that he could not live without the feelings that being with zuko made him feel (emotional & physical)...it's all so passionate-which is why i'm passionate about reading more. i noticed you hadn't started any new stories or updated any others since this one-so i know you must be busy with real life for now.
(in one of your author's notes you wrote that you mom found your story outline and read it-hope you didn't get in trouble. some moms would not want their children to know of such things-wanting them be innocent for ever and knowing only heterosexual sex in the missionary position and only to create babies.)

I think the story is incredible so far. You have them talking serious, talking fun, hunting, playing in the water-you give them plenty of time and activities/opportunities to know each other better. You write wonderfully erotic interactions between zuko and sokka as well. The one with sokka's hips on zuko's knees and sokka pushing into zuko's mouth and coming back down and impaling himself on zuko's finger-HOT!
I enjoyed that you had them prepare breakfast 2gether and then zuko let sokka sleep while he cleaned up. I liked that sokka woke up to find zuko making him dinner and how much zuko enjoyed doing something for someone else and how much sokka enjoyed the meal. I like how playful they can be with each other. I like how zuko likes seeing sokka in red fire country clothes... There's so many things to enjoy about this story. I look forward to reading more. Thanks so much for sharing it. Very well done.

OMG! this story is so cool! But I just have one minor edit that is really bugging me. The part of chapter 4 that says "Haku and the others don’t even know you…”" it should be Haru, not Haku.

hahahahahah LOVE!

EEK!!
you almost got me.
D:
I thought you'd end my happiness there!
:D
lawl, thx4rehchappies!

ok so I know that you haven't updated this in a long time but i just read the whole thing and loved it. you really must update more. please.

Well put together story, is it finished?
You did a nice job not pulling the two guys out of character and effectively feminizing both of them with too much emotion but there is a hint of it.
Overall well done though. I hope it's not over.
-Lyssa

Bwahaha!! Your ending was AWESOME! Seriously, though; your story is really well-written and the imagery is really vivid too. Great job on this and I hope to read more from you soon.

update soon!! this is totally cute