Love your story!
The Goddess Shizuru... lol, sounds very good!
Looking forward to your next chapters...

this is a great story.i dont understand why i didnt read it lol

hope you update soon ^_^

Great chappie. This is getting very very interesting and hope to see the new chapter soon, thanks.
btw, you might want to change Chie back to a girl here. LOL
"Chie placed his hand over it and began controlling its flow."

Interesting chapter. Liked learning a little more about the goddesse's past. Poor Aoi being put in harms way. Glad to see Mikoto and Nao. Hope Mikoto can eventually persuaded to switch sides, hate seeing her and Mai fight. Harder to see a reason for Nao to switch sides. Look forward to seeing where this story goes. Update soon.

Good chapter. Liked how Shizuru killed the guys. Liked how Natsuki did everything she could to protect Shizuru. Poor Natsuki being injured so badly. Poor Mai being captured. Liked how Chie is one of the guardians.

nice.^^

does natsuki have hidden powers? hehe^^

Wow :)

Man, I sure hope this starts makin sense.

Okay I think I get this, still alittle confused. Chie is Earth, Aoi is somethin, Nao is wind? But is Nao a good guy? And Natsuki is that one god who saved Shizuru's god? Or is she a guardian too? Your story got me though. I wanna read it til I finish it!

Interesting chapter.
This chapter really explain a lot - I like it.
also, i like how natsuki didn't care..gosh, can't she see how beautifull shizuru is --someone you feel like you should protect, huh, Natsuki :P
I agreed with one other reviewer..since Natsuki is not the first guardian, I think she should be the last...it make her cooler :D
I bet when the Kanzuki know that Shizuru/Athea is in love with one of her guardian, they are gonna roar...they wanna Shizuru for themselve, it is not?!

sorry it took me so long to read and review but just wanted to say its great and starting to get interesting so keep up the good work :)

Awesome chappie!! I do like the change of plot, very exciting.
Looking forward to the next one, PPMS!!

i think it interesting more every chapter...this chapter made me surprise about why they want to kill Shizuru.Good idea!

that was intresting! the plot switch was a good idea! it really explains shizuru's powers and stuff! that was an awsome scene! it was really good! thanks!

oh-kayy, i'm totally surprised! i thought Natsuki is the first guardian, but it's not. well, my guess will be that Natsuki is the last guardian then...? don't know, but i'm kind of guessing the plot you're going to do in my brain here, and it says just that... lol. but yea, maybe you're going to make Natsuki realize that she is also one of the guardians after all 3 already showed up. but then again, who knows? YOU are the master of the game here. =]
oh, i'm also surprised that you chose Chie as one of the guardian! i mean, i do suspect that it'll be her when you first mention about short black haired girl and stuff, but still... wow, nonetheless, i still love it!
i'm totally hunger for more now~! XD well, i'll wait for you to update no matter how long. all the best for you and thanks for this wonderful fantasy fic!