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RueBroadway
2008-08-29 . chapter 4
Sweet...new chapter!!
Lol, love the Toph bashing :o)

I'm hoping that Sokka can get over this anger(fear) with Zuko. But reading him get through it is pretty fun too!

Looking forward to the next chapter.
Dragon77
2008-08-25 . chapter 4
Great chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.
CryingTearsOfBlood
2008-08-24 . chapter 4
Yaz! I'm happy you updated! It's a good story!
greekeskimokid
2008-08-24 . chapter 4
I So Rain Praise. Just Love This Story. Hair Puffs Haha That Was Cute. Can't Wait To Read More
Veravi
2008-08-24 . chapter 4
Toph knows? xD
I quite like your fic! You describe the character's feelings very detailed and in-depth, more than in most other fics. Your writing style is easy to read with nice wordings.

Sokka as a waterbender is a great idea, but I think you should have shown the reactions of Aang, Toph and the others as well, it must be a big deal for them that Sokka can suddenly waterbend. ;)
For the next chapters, which I'm eager to read and hope they will come xD, I would like to see a little bit more focus on the Zukka relationship, though the whole bending stuff is nice to read, too. xD
(Forgive me my crappy English, not my first language.)
ChipFest
2008-08-24 . chapter 4
heh. loved the last bit from Toph... thats so true XD
Go Zuko making Sokka listen...!
Hope you can update soon!
Cheerio,
Chip~
Bluetiger
2008-08-23 . chapter 4
Wow, you wrote this chapter in just half an hour, it usually takes me longer than that just to write a review. XD

I like the way that both Sokka and Zuko are feeling conflicted about their true feelings. As for Sokka being a waterbender, why not, and I like the idea that some personal trauma is required to trigger the ability. :)
Dragon77
2008-03-15 . chapter 3
Sokka being a water bende rand Zuko being a fire bender is like ying and yang fire and water they were meant for each other.
ChipFest
2008-03-13 . chapter 3
M'ullo!
I loved this chapter how Sokka was trying to learn from Katara basically the samem thing Zuko was teaching Aang...
Wish I'd thought of it...heh. i guess thats why I'm reading and not wwriting...lol
Looking forward to the next Chapter!
Cheerio,
Chip
ChipFest
2008-03-11 . chapter 2
Uh, Oh!
I do like the idea of Sokka being a water bender! Pretty snazzy if you ask me...!!
Bloody dreams/nightmares always seem to mess everyhting up..haha! Its not like they are even real anyways.
To Sokka:: "Its all in your head!"
Ok, now thats over, I hope they work things out.
Cheers,
Chip
Dragon77
2008-03-11 . chapter 2
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
RueBroadway
2008-03-11 . chapter 2
Poor Aang.
Why do I get the feeling he is in for more grueling training now that Zuko and Sokka are entering into their relationship :o)
I'm looking forward to more chapters!!
Rahna
2008-03-11 . chapter 2
I like it, once again! Not much to say, but the plot seems to be getting a bit cliche what with the fighting and all. You might want to work around that though, just make it different!
julia e
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
i was craving a really nice zuko x sokka fic and this was great. the only thing is that sokka may have admitted his feelings a bit too quickly, i mean, he's pretty proud of his ... manly-ness i guess.X-D i can't picture him admitting he's gay very quickly. but oh well, it was cute.
and i also didn't really like the fact that sokka was a waterbender, i like the vulnerability and innocence sokka has as a non-bender (and an uke.X-D), and also the difference between zuko, being a bender, and sokka, being a warrior.
but other than that, as i said before, this was great. i hope you continue this story, i can't wait to read more.(-:
kyra-sama
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
I really like your story
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