|Reviews for Critical Care|
| teenlee 8/19/08 . chapter 15
that was seriously amazing.
jeez! please update soon! ah.
| minipoison 8/19/08 . chapter 15
stupid edward, always protective.
| Lady Skye 1992 8/19/08 . chapter 15
Awesome chapter! Love the cliffdiving part! Please update soon!
| OliviaJane 8/19/08 . chapter 15
lol, Bella saves Jacob.
I wanted to let you know that at least half of your sentences
are missing periods at the end. Maybe there was a problem when
| l8rg8r123 8/19/08 . chapter 1
You need a each sentence. I didn't see a whole lot of punctuation. But it's good, I guess.
| barbiedoll123 8/19/08 . chapter 15
i wonder if she is going to tell him
| PaleViolet 8/9/08 . chapter 14
I love your story, Bella being sick makes me sad tho :( Please Update soon!
| Vel Angelus Vox 8/8/08 . chapter 14
cancer? oh my god! that's so sad. this story has made me tear up, badly! it's so good. i can't wait for more!
| BellaPattinson 8/1/08 . chapter 14
hmm, how can she go from one guy from another? oh well, we finally know she loves Edward. Can't wait for next chapter.
| XxAnGeLGonEBaDxX 7/27/08 . chapter 14
Great story this chapter was funny, Bella actully liking the rain, heheh jakes mad cant wait to see more
| amobutterfly25 7/27/08 . chapter 14
jake has the green monster. its so becoming of his character. its shouldn't matter to him really i mean she only has one life to live and its sort of shorter so why isn't he letting her live the way she wants?
| teenlee 7/27/08 . chapter 14
aww that was amazing :)
| Lady Skye 1992 7/27/08 . chapter 14
WOnderful chapter. Please update as soon as possible
| barbiedoll123 7/27/08 . chapter 14
aw edward and bella are so cute
| BloomingNights 7/27/08 . chapter 14
i love feel good chapters, i wonder what the vision alice had was about...can't wait for more!