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teenlee 8/19/08 . chapter 15oh. wow. that was seriously amazing. jeez! please update soon! ah. |
minipoison 8/19/08 . chapter 15stupid edward, always protective. jordan |
Lady Skye 1992 8/19/08 . chapter 15Awesome chapter! Love the cliffdiving part! Please update soon! -AMS |
OliviaJane 8/19/08 . chapter 15lol, Bella saves Jacob. I wanted to let you know that at least half of your sentences are missing periods at the end. Maybe there was a problem when you uploaded. |
l8rg8r123 8/19/08 . chapter 1You need a each sentence. I didn't see a whole lot of punctuation. But it's good, I guess. |
barbiedoll123 8/19/08 . chapter 15i wonder if she is going to tell him |
PaleViolet 8/9/08 . chapter 14I love your story, Bella being sick makes me sad tho :( Please Update soon! |
Vel Angelus Vox 8/8/08 . chapter 14cancer? oh my god! that's so sad. this story has made me tear up, badly! it's so good. i can't wait for more! |
BellaPattinson 8/1/08 . chapter 14hmm, how can she go from one guy from another? oh well, we finally know she loves Edward. Can't wait for next chapter. |
XxAnGeLGonEBaDxX 7/27/08 . chapter 14Great story this chapter was funny, Bella actully liking the rain, heheh jakes mad cant wait to see more -Angel |
amobutterfly25 7/27/08 . chapter 14jake has the green monster. its so becoming of his character. its shouldn't matter to him really i mean she only has one life to live and its sort of shorter so why isn't he letting her live the way she wants? |
teenlee 7/27/08 . chapter 14aww that was amazing :) |
Lady Skye 1992 7/27/08 . chapter 14WOnderful chapter. Please update as soon as possible -AMS |
barbiedoll123 7/27/08 . chapter 14aw edward and bella are so cute |
BloomingNights 7/27/08 . chapter 14i love feel good chapters, i wonder what the vision alice had was about...can't wait for more! |