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Prism-Tea 5/28/12 . chapter 6
THE WORD IS CALLED:

"CONCERNED".

):

Not "CONSIRNED"!

xD
Prism-Tea 5/28/12 . chapter 1
Heh. Naruto's a perv.
AkihikoXMisaki 3/21/12 . chapter 23
That was an amazing way to end this! I loved their baby! :3 really great story and I'm sad its over. :( but it was amazing. Very fantastic and fun to read :D
AkihikoXMisaki 3/20/12 . chapter 18
That was amazing! So that's what Sasuke was up to. Oh well, in the end it backfired and helped instead of hurt :D Seriously this is really awesome story, I like the steadyness of it and how it's so much like real life! I feel like this is something that could, has, or had happened to someone and I guess that's why it's so captivating! :3 Really really great!
AkihikoXMisaki 3/20/12 . chapter 17
Bathroom smex Kehehe Sasuke so had that coming x3 I really want to beleive that was Kakashi! Such a pervy old man he is :P I wish Kank's fater didn't call 'humpf' D: Oh well bathroom smex at a school damn when a teacher hears you but thinks it's to hot to bust is prety epic xD haha
AkihikoXMisaki 3/20/12 . chapter 16
:O *gaping since Naruto's smexy dancing* *blink blink* THEY ARE SO F_ING HOT! / I love the punkyness! KYAA Amazing! I can so picture them *heart* Really nice choice in wardrob! Fits like a magnet hehe :3
AkihikoXMisaki 3/20/12 . chapter 15
I liked it :3 It kinda give a hint or foreshadowing as to what may come but nothing that actualy hints about it. I can just think of him getting this tiny arm of minions and taking them to the dance haha :P
AkihikoXMisaki 3/20/12 . chapter 13
Gah! Fucking Sasuke HAS to skrew up things! That bastard, Sakura is a bitch too for threatening Temari but if she wasn't a coward thenshe woulda done something then and not glared at Naruto. Grr Neji is kinda cool 'cus you can tell he really doesn't want to get into it and let it be. I knew Sasuke would try something like that too oh well, I bet he gets pummled later xD
AkihikoXMisaki 3/20/12 . chapter 11
Gaara is such an akaward dancer hehe :P Ahh Kankuro haha aI can't help but laugh so I decided to take a break of reading before I wake my house up :P this is so funny and I can imagine Gaara's solem monotone face just staring at Kank's like he's a total idiot for acting that way at a simple question xD Ahh the embarassment kehehehe, oh Gaa-chan how innocent you can be, yet so deviously evil you are. I love how you made him so straight forward! I can imagine him standing and looking at every single bottle lol. Oh Kami he's found the toys. His innocence was just a facade! '...then stopped seeing a few whips...maybe next time' / I reallly wana see the next part xD *Nose bleed* Kami its a feather and a cock ring Ahh .
AkihikoXMisaki 3/20/12 . chapter 9
AWhh I love a KankKiba limey-lemon :3 Yeah, Kiba with Kankuro I just cannot see him as the topping type. Maybe like the uke seems to be seme and starts it all agressivly and such but then ends up being the receiver lol. Really great and it's a nice filler-type thing :3
AkihikoXMisaki 3/20/12 . chapter 7
Hehe :3 Temari- I so got what you were implying haha! Is Neji still coming? I hope lol and what an amazing kiss they had / AWhh :P really great with the character's as well
AkihikoXMisaki 3/20/12 . chapter 6
Hehe party and I'm getting the couple hints lol I automatically put KibaKank, GaaNaru, and ShikaTemaNeji sounds really nice xD I love the ShikaNeji pairing and ShikaTema so this is pulling together quite well! :D
AkihikoXMisaki 3/19/12 . chapter 5
I really like Gaara's POV. We don't see much in the anime/manga so it's kinda hard to know exactly how he is. I like how you flipped their lives a bit where Naruto is the one who's outside looking in without anyone and Gaara has all the 'friends' [as he put it] This was a nice change in the story and it helps see that Naruto realy isn;t the only one with not-so-innocent thoughts hehe :P
AkihikoXMisaki 3/19/12 . chapter 4
So the past few chapters were great! I still love thier characters :3 It seems like there could be more, IF it was one of those stories but the pace is really nice and like something that would happen in real life [which it does] :D
AkihikoXMisaki 3/19/12 . chapter 1
Ahh I probably won't review every chapter because I'll want to read all of it but I'll try :) I really like how you kept Gaara's character and think it's really on key to his normal self. He kinda hates the hastle of things not going the first time and iws oretty monotoned and persistant, and I love it! :D Naruto's character is the one seeking attention and I'm guessing, has minor trust issues because he's been teased all his life, and once again I love it! :) Nice theme too with them being in high school and all x3
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