Great! Needs to be a bit longer. Need more. It was kind of confussing at times but all and all it was a good story.

hiya! i've already read your story but then i read it again...it's really good. Whenever i put my story on this web site, i want you all to review it! I'm especally asking Aaliyah-Charity (because she is my best friend from skool) and the rest of my best friends to review mine! but...that'll tak eabout another 400 years to finish...oh well...hopefully my first story here would be as good as your all are. :)

That was a good start. ;)

Hahaha! Oh yeah ! I can predict more troubles to come ! Everytime Piccolo or Vegeta are stuck in a cute situation they usually blow a vein. Well, it seems like Trunks did his job and I'd say maybe he overdid it ! That hyperactive girl is major trouble for the whole DBZ gang. *Shudders* The incarnation of evil within a little girl. Can't wait for next chapter and the DBZ gang's torment at the hand of that little kid !

i like it so far. one question where is the rest

ooooooooh continueeeeeeee

what? a cliffhanger! i'm going to KILL U! unless of course u post then next part soon! and i mean VERY soon!

Very good start, I would keep the Uh-oh chapter with chapter one since their about the same thing. Also hurry up and finish the story I'm in suspense

love

Vicky

Hi Girl! Very cute story...even though I don't follow DBZ..lol. You used some very good descriptions...excellent chapter! Now..hurry and get that 2nd one up! :)

Cool. I liked it. Thanks for putting such a nice review for my story and putting it on you favorites list. Keep checking for chapter 2. .

Hey, Aaliyah keep up the good work! ;o)

Hey wassup! Well u already kno I like ur story, and send me another fic when ur done! CYA! _

This is really good so far but...its a CLIFFHANGER!(my friend, cliff kills me and then scolds me for liking dbz.)