Whew! Okay, finally reading the entries from the last challenge o.O Your fic seemed quite short when I scrolled down to get the 'Review' button, fortunately I see it *is* more than 10 words and therefore is eligible XD Alright, on to the review:

I thought the ending was brilliant. A lot of misdirection going on in the beginning of the fic and the summary that made me think it was about Ron falling in love with a Muggle girl or something, and then I thought it was some kinky thing he had gotten into, but then I realised you were just being misdirecting so I tried to guess what you were on about. One of the guesses was a slot machine, but then there was that cloud of steam and strange and wonderful fragrances =P Anyway! I thought that was a brilliant piece of misdirection and the last bit of dialogue was well done.

However I think you started off a bit shaky, though. There are a few typos in the beginning, nothing major but yeah. The dialogue in the beginning I thought was not entirely smooth/natural...can't quite put my finger on it but that was how I felt. I liked the detail of the abandoned kitchen, though, I thought that was a nice idea.

Oh God, this was hilarious. I love it. Though, I don't read Harry Potter often, well I most of them time don't even like him;-). But THIS is one of really, really good stories out here in our vast ... which is really wonderfull. *giggle* Delightful...

Finally, I reviewed!! (sorry it took so long...)

I loved the idea for this. :D It was so original on the couple; you had me laughing so much my mom was terrified of me!! LOl.

Anyway, I loved the dialogue you put in this. It seemed very realistic things the characters would say. :)

Overall, nice job!! I looved it!! ;)

That is a great idea! Loved it.

Okay, this? Really super cute. I'm a huge Ron fan, and you so had me going as he was talking to Harry . . . then Hermione . . . and the end with Snape. I'm giggling tons over here.

I only saw two times where you have a typo with Hermione's name, where there's an "m" instead of an "n". But this story's such a funny moment of fluff! Great job.

To quote Ron, "oh God yes."

That was quite the hysterical twist right there. For a time, I was thinking, are you SERIOUS, did she write Ron/Nagini?! But then you revealed your... revelation... and I cracked up so hard I had to go to the bathroom. So I'm back now, saying that this was amazingly funny! I love how you built it up to be some huge thing, and deliver... well I don't want to ruin it. But it's too awesome to not review!!

Kudos! Looks like we're competing... *evil grin*

~Satine