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| veganwrocker 2008-08-28 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really nice. They seemed pretty much IC, or at least how I have imagined them. The only problem was the grammar/punctuation seemed to have some mistakes, so you might want to get it proof-read, but that is so not the important part of a fic. The important part was content and it was awesome. Nice job! |
| sheshsopno 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseadorable! |
| SilverDrama 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseAw, that as a cute sibling fic. At first, I felt James was a bit off, but then I realized with the age difference and the way he acts, this would've been the exact way Fred and George would've talke to Ginny, so it actually fits perfectly. I can see why James would freak though, his fourteen year old sister making out with the Slytherin, sixteen year Malfoy, that would make him a little creeped, but how would Al take it?? Sorry, I'm rambling, good story! -silverdrama |
| seeker68 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseCute little one-shot. For as short as it is you got a lot of emotion into it. I think you caught the brother/sister thing pretty well too. I only saw a few typo's but I don't remember what they were. Oh, glad to see Lily got some of Ginny's fire (why wouldn't she?) and I'd love to see the look on Harry's face too. |
| 5redroses 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseCute and over-protective! |
| Jess.91 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseWell I liked it, but I'm a sucker for sibling-protectiveness. Sweet little one shot. |
| HermioneWeasleyFan 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseI lvoe it! You should change it to Lily and Scorpius character search. It's so cute and I think it would be more popular in there with the rest of it's Lily/Scorpius fics! (plus it would make the pairing seem more popular if it has more then 37 fics) very very good fic! ^_^ |
| hondagirl 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseCute. I loved the protective older brother James. Just all around goodness. :) |
| rixietrixie91 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute! I liked it. Write more one-shots about these two, they're so cute. James is right, Harry's reaction would be priceless! |
| Princess Gillybean 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseaw so sweet. I love it. |
| KissMyBooboo 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abusefor some strange reason i actually liked it!! >. |
| InkGothical 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseAw that was so sweet! Aw I love that, it's great! InkGothical |
| A Quick Death Will Never Co... 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseomg so so cute! i can just see that happening! |