Reviews for Jungle Fury: Fatalistic Flirtations

Reviews For: Jungle Fury: Fatalistic Flirtations

MizFortune 2008-05-30 ch 1,	abusethis is one of the best stories ever! I love the ending quote! I wish you's make it a multi chapter with scenes from other episodes. Best story ever! faves, suscribles, alerts
CathyD 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuseAw, nice fic. I really enjoyed this one, especially that last line. Great job! :) ~Cat~
Freedom909 2008-03-14 ch 1,	abuseThis is my favorite part of the episode
JuseaPeterson 2008-03-12 ch 1,	abuseThis was pretty good. I like how you had that extra bit of Lily staying up and watching over Casey. I like how you described the water fight in the end. I don't think that Theo is jealous of them or Lily's feelings toward Casey. And I see their relationship as going much slower, but I like that you didn't make them kiss or anything. All in all pretty good story.
aznboi85 2008-03-10 ch 1,	abuseAh, another fic based on A Taste of Poison. It's always nice to see another JF fic, especially another Casey/Lily fic! I liked your take on those two scenes. The opening quote wasn't accurate. Be careful not to mix up the words 'then' and 'than'. I liked how you acknowledged the fact that Casey was POISONED. The episode kind of didn't. It didn't show him sick, in pain, or suffering at all. My guess is that he had recovered by the time they showed the scene at night in the loft. I liked how you had Theo be jealous. While I agree that Casey and Lily do have feelings for each other, I was shocked that Lily would slip up and refer to Casey as a loved one when talking to Theo. My two cents is that Lily is in denial, and thus wouldn't acknowledge her feelings for Casey to anybody much less herself. I liked how you had an antidote. The episode gave us the impression that Casey just got better over time, the poison eventually wore off. Now, the last scene I disagree with you. I thought Casey seemed to buy Lily's "little brother" comment. I do like your last line though. Oh, and is it a cup or a glass that Lily was washing? Because you originally called it a glass, then you turned around and called it a cup. In your last paragraph, there were a couple of places where I thought you should have had a comma, but didn't. Oh, and in the last paragraph, you put Leo instead of Theo. I hope I didn't offend you with my comments. I really did like the content of this fic. I DID put it on my favorite stories list after all. The other stuff is just minor details.
angel353 2008-03-10 ch 1,	abuseLoved it! I am so psyched that I am not the only one who noticed that she was so lying at the end! He looked seriously crushed but didn't really want her to know that! I've looked at a couple of forums and some didn't really bring that idea up. But they did bring up the old idea that she might go for the White Ranger later on. That is just too Dino Thunder, plus the White Ranger is an old friend of RJ's and I doubt Lily would go for an older guy like that. And she seems to care to much for Casey to do anything like that any way. Keep the stories coming!
dorkygirl 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseI really like the take that you got in the first half of the story. I did kind of find it odd that the monster said it would be painful, but the next shot of Casey is him chilling in his hammock, seemingly perfectly okay. I have a nitpick or two, though. After the monster zaps him with poison, he does say it's NOT lethal, but very painful. There's a few grammatical errors, but nothing too overbearing. Overall, it's a good story and it's written well. I liked your take on the last scene and I like the last line as well. You did a great job.

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