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Vampire Kid Kara
2008-07-09
ch 4,
abuseohh I LOVE THIS! It's so original! You don't often see SLASH in Alice in Wonderland, so I'm happy. Even if this is a strange pairing (both of them) you make it reasonable. I love how you are sort of vague about everything leaving the reader having to decide for themselves what's quite going on in reality and the White Rabbits mind. Sorry, but I just can't picture them as humans (or semi-humans). They're animals to me (not the king or queen, but the rabbit and cat, etc.). But I still love this and really hope you continue. It's very unique! And such good writing too.
Siouxsie Granada
2008-07-06
ch 4,
abuse-flails-

I love you.

That whole with-the-king sequence...

it makes me want to write more in my story, actually.


I love how reserved and awkward he is! So adorable.

I'ma stop rambling now. =]

Talk to ya later.
skyblueangel
2008-05-19
ch 3, anon.
abuseawsome can't wait to read more
Siouxsie Granada
2008-04-29
ch 2,
abuseYou must be my new best friend. =D

You write awesome slash Alice in Wonderland fan fiction, which I could find nothing to complain about, since I love your writing style [it's very similar to Mr. Carroll's, actually]. Also, the descriptions and the way it flowed were positively amazing.

I cannot find many people that enjoy slash or Alice in Wonderland, actually, and I found this rather indulgent and slightly funny at parts.

Please say you're going to add on to this story?
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