It was hot. Though, I kept hearing 'Blame it on the Alchohol' while I was reading it.

Six chapters of SetoxJou goodness! ^^ And you didn't leave the story off with the lemon chapter (cough-like I would've-cough) so it felt complete. Yay! I liked it.

~;~Shaku

Wow... I just finished reading this, and it feels like I've been left in a state of shock. This was so sensually written, absolutely breathtaking. I especially loved your choice of words "emotionally attached...ect.". Also reminds me of something I wrote a while ago. I really love the story, you're a fantastic writer.

Best wishes for your future writing!

sad/sweet fic

THAT WAS GOOD! DO MORE FICS OF KAIBA AND JOU!

i really enjoyed your story

This story was really good! I'm glad you wrote it.

aww so cute and darka and angsty O.O just how I like them^^

OMG! This was so good! I loved it. Whoever would have thought that THE Seto Kaiba could be so sweet. And to Jounouchi no less!
I loved the story and I look forward to reading more of your work!
-Near

Oh : P you're sort of silly. You referenced Seto's abuse (see... it happened) but didn't do anything to prove Katsuya's.

And oh geese, the low morality rates in this story. To drink to stop the pain of drinking, to become a violent drunk... to have sex with a drunk person who admittedly would probably not remember what happened. And then Seto's: I promise I won't hurt you, followed directly after by... yeah... actually... I need to think about this. Um... yeah, you stay there and I'm just gonna go. O.o

O, I thought I should point out the view changes were difficult to figure out sometimes because there was no warning or hint that you switched characters. Though sometimes at the end of a sentence switch you specified by having the other character refer to the first character.


When he snapped out of his thoughts, he noticed that Seto had removed his shirt and was looking right into his eyes.

Without any hesitation, he grabbed Jounouchi’s hand and placed it flat against his pale, toned stomach. “Touch me,” he demanded softly.

the confusion is because you use "he" to describe both characters.

Anyway, happy writing! Keep up with amusing stories!

This story =

This was a beautiful piece!

lol for two things. AW on the ending xD
and lmao at how you knew the exact page number and volume =P

lol, you rhymed xD

i ♥ this story, love the title for this chapter xD