 RemmyBlack 2009-09-04 . chapter 3this is really good =) I cant wait until more =) |
 Smurfs Eat Apple Pies 2009-08-04 . chapter 3I LOVE it! |
 MizzClumsyBabee 2009-06-21 . chapter 3wow the quack teacher is strangely enough correct :P |
 lilyflower102 2009-06-19 . chapter 3oh my god write another chappy |
 Twilight-lover-2008 2009-05-24 . chapter 3i really like this story,
are you gonna continue??
oxox |
 LazyLibra 2009-04-24 . chapter 3mwahahahahhahahahahahaha!
UPDATE! |
 majorGIT 2009-04-22 . chapter 1:] I only just read the first chapter, but I really like it, and definitely appreciate the Beatles reference! XD
you'r writing style's cool and conversational. its like a stream of concience, how the way it reads is like its actually happening in her head and all!
just a note, sometimes it gets confusing to tell which character is talking. so maybe when you're writing dialogue you could put like, ,"said James. or something. just when more than two people are talking to make it a little easier to follow!
anyway, fun story! cant wait to read more! |
 fattoad 2009-04-22 . chapter 3Great chapter! |
 Edwards-girl-from the start 2008-11-25 . chapter 2Oh! Better update soon I want them to get together otherwise this story is so not worth it |
 DarklingShift 2008-08-12 . chapter 2NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!! i'm waiting so long ... :( |
 xStrawberryKissesx 2008-07-12 . chapter 2You seriously have to update this story!! It is AMAZING! Please, Please update! I totally love you story! |
 Shadowrayne 2008-07-11 . chapter 2You can't just toddle off into pregnant obscurity and leave me with THAT.
UPDATE!
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 musicmadness321 2008-05-22 . chapter 2Good story!
I don't generally read Potter fics but this is really cool!
Update soon! :) |
 okok 2008-05-05 . chapter 2 okok i want you to stop writing bases and such and finish this one off:D
its real good |
 simmybabe 2008-04-24 . chapter 2 this is so good:)
updaatte!! |