Loved your story... and hospital stuff,that's why my OC is a doctor, hehe. Like I always say, the "dark side" of their missions (wounds and possible death) is a bit underated, but it exists :3 That's why that fanficion is great.
Keep up the good work! Love your writings!

Oh, only a taste? Then I can't wait to see what you can really create! Lookin forward to it.

well I'll be waiting for you next release then

Very excellent. This should be viewed as an example of how to properly write a good story.

Your writing skills are excellent. You have decent imagery, good diction and a great plot. It was heartwarming and sad at the same time, but emotions like this, when combined the right way, can turn into a good piece like this.

One thing I noticed: this is rated M! It shouldn't be! The worst thing you say is 'fuck,' and I believe I've said that a few times in my stories and they're still rated T. If you want more reeviews, you should change it to the T rating.

Good Regards,
-Snake of the Rose

Loved every bit of it! I though it was great. Kind of went gaga when that mutant thing owned them both, but I'm fine now.>_> Favorites!

Very Good!! I like! I like! Please! Continue xDD I'd like to know what happens to Falcl ^^