I've been waiting for some humor out of you...
good choice of where to write it(under-Supernatural-)
Keep it going!

this was a delight! ...she's riding you like a horse, man...that just got me! Your story within a story reminds me of the books my mom used to read, we called them "bodice rippers"...you know the kind that Fabio guy with the hair posed for? I just loved reading this!