 Beyond the Pages 2008-03-19 . chapter 1Sorry that I didn't review before; my school was f* up again.
This is good, but I personally think that you could put your amazing writing skills to better use. Some of us (like myself) just aren't cut out for excessive humor.
I hope you don't take this as a personal stab - on the contrary, I think you're an awesome writer. But I also think that you could do better.
I hope I haven't offended you. If I have, please let me know. It was not my intention to offend you in the slightest.
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