O, I think this is one of my favorites of your stories. It's really in-character for all of them, and just perfect. I could picture everything happening. Good job.

I was going to be lazy and skip the review because I wanted to go to the second part but I felt guilty!

Once again, great job of elaborating where the TV shows fizzle.

This is wonderful. I love how much it adds to the episode and the little details that reveal so much about Sheppard like the letters and how much his Marines love him.

Okay ... great ending! The last paragraph was strong!

God, great story ... I know theres a chapter 2, but geez how do you follow that up!! Very introspective with Sheppard. I think you captured all his worries about him "men" great and I loved Rodney's barging in to check on him... leave it to the enlisted man to have some contraband in his pocket.

I just wonder (and I did even when this aired) where the heck did these folks go to the bathroom? I know its scifi and we don't talk about that ... but geez! The jumper is only about 8 10 feet long ... I can't make it a couple of hours and have to go. (lol)

Fantastic job. Definitely fixed what was missing from the episode. I love seeing John actually act as military commander and interact with his marines.

Great story, wonderfully done with a nice dose of John!Whump

Aw... Team love!! XD As always it was a wonderful tag.. Poor Shep having to deal with all that constant bickering. I'm glad he had that nice moment with Rodney though.. It's hard to translate that into the show. They don't have too many of those kind of moments. I really liked the Tao of Rodney episode because of that.

Hehe. I love gin rummy.. I win all the time. XD I never actually remembered how much time they spent in the jumper.. 2 weeks would be horrible! Where do they PEE?! M.. loved the ep. Teal'c said "indeed" SO MANY TIMES! AH!

Oh Shep.. I'm betting he's had a concussion leading to complications.. it's always complications with him. *sigh* ^-^

LOVE IT!

Ah another gem from you. Finally catching up on my reading and reviewing. So many good stories, so little time. I love Rodney in this. He is just a great character to play around with in a fan fiction. And it's a great tag to the epi which never really addressed just how Shep managed to get in that darn space suit himself. I know he's a man of many talents, but still...

Great story!

Amazing story

Great story!! I love it!!

awesome, I want more! I'm looking forward to your next fic!

A hurting Shep always makes for a good story and when it is pyschological and physical hurt it just means it's going to be doubly good.