great story.

Very nice :) I loved the beginning part, where he was still making love to her and your details that you added in...That shy, nervous smile made me swoon :) sweet one-shot. Thanks.

I loved it...especially Lois' inner monologue. ^^ Keep up the great work and please give us some more!! ^^

Wow... Amazing fic. Loved it.

cute, I hope his side comes out

Oh this was just so romantic and hot! Keep it coming!