This is a very nice story, you've captured the siblings well. It's very promising, I hope you would continue it.

Please don't fail maths, that will suck for both you and us...

Anyway, beautiful chapter. I love the way you hint at things, such as Abe and Al beginning to go their seperate ways and Ari asking about her mother, without going into great detail. Very subtle, and very effective. ;)

Please update soon! I love it so far! Arianna is such a dear. I hope you don't fail math class! I'm trying not to as well... Good luck to the both of us, I guess.

great work, keep it up.

aw, so cute! ;)
anie.

*LE GASP* An *actual* plot? XD

I love how you started this with Albus and Aberforth sort-of bickering. Like, not really, but just the banter between them was really good. Your dialogue flows really naturally, which is nice.

And I also liked that Aberforth wanted to guilt Al a bit before going to get Ari. The slight tension between the brothers is really well-written; it's subtle, but it's definitely *there.*

[...one of which started with an ‘f’ and made Ariana laugh when she heard him mutter it.]

-grin- I really love how we learn about characters like Ariana and Albus through these little indirect statements.

[“Ariana Grace Dumbledore!”]

Oh, I love, love, LOVE that her middle name is Grace! It seems, at least to me, to be such a sweet and pure name, and it suits her perfectly!

[Wonderful, she’s a Muggle, and she encouraging Ari to climb more trees.]

That should be "...and she's encouraging Ari..." But I do like that they were maybe climbing trees together.

And I like Viv's character; she likes Ariana, which is important for any potential girlfriend to Abe. And she's really...she's not afraid to tell it like it is, which is always good. And she doesn't seem like a Mary-Sue, and that, of course, is always good.

-Kyota

This was very cute again! You've done a great job!

Pinky_x

Aww this was very cute Love!

Pinky_x

eh, i think its alright so far, i really like to see where it might go

Excellent second chapter! Cute title. I thought of two things.
1. The reference to the wolf in sheep's clothing (obvious)
2. The Devil Wears Prada XD
I love the sly little references to Gellert. And yes, Aberforth is very endearing (behaving just like a boy in his mid-teens), as are the hints of future romance.

*huggles and emoticon love* ;)

I really enjoyed this chapter, although I do think that Abe would have been a little more hesitant about having a Muggle girl in his house. *plot bunny for Love's fic* Gellert and Viv meeting would be hilarious. ;)

Rambling aside, your characterisations are amazing and I'm really enjoying every minute of them.

Haha, that girl is pretty witty. I like her and approve of their blooming romance. =D I hope the next chapter is as good as this one was, because then this could develop into one of my favorite stories on here! :)

I like Ariana's friend! She did a great job standing up to Abe!

wonderful :) love this. *wonders what they are doing*
*doesn't have time to write a long review*
anie.

I like Viv - she's quite a character! Poor Abe, he's gonna have his hands full with her - lol! Are you going to include the major tragedy that occured in canon in this story, or is this just going to be an AU?