...don't die, Kuwabara. Seriously. Don't die. D: BECAUSE IF YOU DO YUKINA WILL CRY AND HIEI WILL GET PISSED AND.. AND.. HE'LL KILL EVERYONE AND THAT WILL BE THE END OF THE STORY. RIGHT THERE. Yeah. :C

I still feel bad for Hiei~ Threesome might solve the problem, though I have a hard time imagining either him or Kiyomi being too fond of sharing. Still, it's better than nothing... Butbut, I'm sure there's some way Hiei won't be left out completely! :c Shorties need love too... even if they're scary and violent.

Is Zenn going to show up sometime, now that he's been mentioned? "Speak of the devil," and all. Kurama should beat him up. Or something.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

...Wow. May I just say...

"Hiei? Is going to KILL her when he finds out about this."

Ohyes he is.. XD Maybe Kiyomi should start learning how to defend against the Dragon of the Darkness Flame.

...can I give Kiyoshi a hug? :< Wanna see more! ...Yeah, Yusuke can be kind of a prick. -nods- And yeah. O__O; He used to annoy the you-know-what out of me, but now that I'm rewatching the series, he's actually kinda... cool. Yaoi fangirls are scary! D: I mean, sure, Hiei and Kurama can be a cute couple but THEY DON'T HAVE TO BE TOGETHER ALL THE TIME OMG. D:

fgasjhfgasjfga. Next chapter please. I WANNA KNOW ABOUT THE DEMONS. D:

Okay, I'm writing this as I read, so... yeah, just keep that in mind?

Ohgosh. Yusuke is a horrible, horrible person. Forget the people in the tournament, HE'S gonna be the reason Kiyomi dies! ...Death by Hiei's katana. Scary.

Eek, Kuawabara! Stop feeling bad, we don't want any dead Kiyomis on our hands. D:

...Or maybe Kiyomi will be the reason she dies. Kiyomi and Kurama are cute, though I feel sorry for Kurama and Hiei. Hiei especially, since he's alone. :( Kiyomi and Kurama have each other though. :3 So yay for that, but... poor Hiei. :( Even if he is a jerk and keeps calling her half-breed.

Looking forward to the next chapter! What other kinds of people have entered the tournament? Any big, bad demons that Koenma wants put down? 8D;

...Wow, it's been awhile since I've read (or written) anything for Yu Yu Hakusho. Glad to see you're writing for it again! :3

Kiyomi seems pretty interesting, I'd like to see more of the sarcasm she's known for brightening up peoples' days with. And Kuwabara's immediate promise of protection made me smile, though Hiei's statement made me laugh out loud - 'cause it's kinda true. XD ...Kiyoshi sounds like the kind of person I'd want to give a hug to. I don't know why. He just... does.

Will we see more of this Kyo person in future chapters, or at least hear about him? I'm curious! :3

Looking forward to the next chapter!

-Calamity-Angel