Your writing style is very exquisite and refreshing. Beautiful. I do hope you decide to update soon. I want more of Faith.

...I just got the title XD

...are those the hunter from the first chapter? ...JERKS.

And I'm guessing Faith will be the main character, no?

~This is just beautiful. I love it! I'm guessing Faith is the main character. I could be wrong! lol

HEL-LO!! 8D I love this series! It took me three days to read "BOA", and I loved it!! X3 Actually, I was prepared to beat you up when Vivian died, she's one of my favorite characters in TTYD D: But then you put in an awesome plot twist...and now, I once more grant you the title of "Most Grandly Exalted Super Great Chicken Miasma, Served With a Side of Awesomeness". And you made them have kids. How great :D ...You know, I'm actually already kind of scared FOR Faith and OF Faith...she reminds me just a LITTLE too much of Beldam. My brother LOLed when I told him Beldam meant 'old, ugly hag'. XD Oh, you know what I mean. Oh yeah, I plan to change my answering machine to this sooner or later:
HELLO. YOU HAVE REACHED THE NUMBER ONE FAN OF THE MOST GRANDLY EXALTED SUPER GREAT CHICKEN MIASMA, SERVED WITH A SIDE OF AWESOMENESS. THE NUMBER ONE FAN IS BUSY WORSHIPING HER HIGHNESS AT THE MOMENT. PLEASE LEAVE A MESSAGE AFTER THE BEEP. *BEEP*
...Sorry if that scares you. :O
~Best wishes EVA from Michaiah~
PS: NUMBER ONE FAN HERE!! I'll bet others have said it already, though. Aww D: And if you want me to cool it, sure. I'm overly eccentric sometimes. XP And it often scares people.

Koopa + Shadow Siren = Dark Koopa. PERFECT SENSE. 8D

I'm sure you get asked this a lot, but will you ever be doing a Pikario parody of Paper Mario 64?

OMG! You have no idea I've been waiting for this chapter! Anyway good work with it.

I bet the main charater are Hope and Faith.

Ah-ha, an update. Fantastic! n_n

(Say... Miasma, where've you been? You haven't posted on our SSBB forum forever...)

Hm... The daughter's names sound awfully familiar... Like I've heard them somewhere in the story before...
:P

I like the cross-species path you took with Hope. It sounds awesome.

Anyway, Ciao! Update soon!

AW Koops and Vivian have a litle girl, that is amazing. You have you update soon, like, really, really soon!
You can make it a christmas present to us!

Hm.

Wait.

I thought Vivian died in the first story. O_o Maybe I need a refresher course...

Still... YOU SHOULD'VE GIVEN ME A NOTE ON THIS! :P I've missed TWO WHOLE CHAPTERS. T_T

Hmm, anyway, great stuff so far! Continue please. :)

Oh, how sweet. But... Where's Mario?! I know he didn't play a very integral part in BOA, but isn't he still considered a friend?

...Whatever. I haven't read a fanfic with good spelling/grammar in a while, especially one with lots of philosophical ideas and stuff.

Ciao! Update soon!

And so that's where everyone is...neat. Waffles's story was the most fun one to read. Six more yoshis?! XD

So, looks like Koops did end up as mayor...and...he has a kid? Aw...

I knew you hadn't given up on this story! Not after all the previews you had done in the first story. Anyway, it's like you said: this chapter was more exposition than anything else, but it's understandable, seeing this is the first time we've seen Koops in a while. Anyway, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, hope it's up soon!

Well, I honestly thought you may have decided not to write this anymore since BOA ended rather well as it was. I really forgot how well you can write these sort of stories and I really didn't notice how much I missed reading from you.

I just can't imagine Goombella with kids though at least not immediately. I would have thought she'd have married her work and have kids a fair bit later or just be married with no kids :p.

Anyway some really good explaining here, I particularly liked the picture too, I agree with Koops, the mental image is better that way :).

Is Koops and Vivian going to be in this?