*tears up* zomg...that was so sad! ='[ WHY ROXAS, WHY?!?!?!

thats so sad.

the ending... was good. perfect ending... oh how i wish they had gotten a happy ending. but thats not going to happen any time soon.

I liked it. now i must fave it:)

That was really lovely. I love how it wasn't happy (yeah, I'm weird like that; I relish in the bitter and sad things that come my way ^_^*) because it made it so unlike other fics. It related to the characters situation in Kingdon Hearts 2, and their real feelings (cos I like to believe Axel and Roxas had a little something more then friendship even though it's somewhat Diseny and is 12 ;) ) I love your grammer! For some reason, it really was perfect; short blunt sentances for what they were saying but all these long hidden thoughts that they couldn't speak. The static was great as well, like Roxas was really trying to remeber Axel (which showed a The whole layout of the story was quite unique and it looked really nice. Really well done, it was really great.

That wasn't happy...

Sad!
I love it!

well, if ya don't know and your slate's wiped clean, there's only one solution... START OVER!

sorry, that was just my closing thought at the end of the story. i loved it, keep writting!

aw :'(

sad... but good, i like it. it's a good idea and you carried it really well.

I liked it. It was good and sad and I liked the 'who are you' part.