Awsome story. More please?

Love this story please update soon

Nice story. Next chapter perhaps?

this is good, you should probably pair Ally with Marty, but make her hate his guts at first, still please carry one writing this it is great.

you should really keep going on this story because it's really good, keep going, i am soo onto watching vampire high on youtube, it's exellent, don't you think so? This story could be really good if u make it that way, continue on, keep going!

Interesting... can't wait to see where you go with this. :)

interesting. very interesting. i don't know if i like ally just yet, but i do like that she's not a massive walking beauty bombshell. UPDATE SOON!

Oh i like this :) can't you just put the next chappie up 4 me ? lolz, i like it like it :D