Wow, this story is amazing. You've written these two so well! :D

Stunningly beautiful. (^_^)

lovely dear, just lovely.

Beautiful story, I really enjoyed it.

I really liked this. It was different than I normally read, but I loved how you told the stories. Great Job!
~Snyder~

Wow...this was fabulous!

I love it... subtle, sweet and mature. Without much drama and angst, I can still feel the passion underneath.