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RedRumAkatsuki
2009-12-27 . chapter 1
This is REAALLY weird. My girlfriend must be rubbing off on me cause i still find this cute when it's not on an occasional "okay..." moment.
Bitter-Sweet-ish
2009-10-18 . chapter 1
Wowzers, probably the most creative and the most different story I've ever read on Fanfiction. Awesome job! Can't wait for the next chapters

Btw, Sasori with cat ears+tail=so hot. If you mind me saying so :).
sweetthings8
2009-08-15 . chapter 8
The feeling and description you put into this story astonishes me. Mastery of the english language is only scratching the surface when describing your writing. Your detail to plot and characterism certifies you for a long wholesome life of this marvelous writing. (I'm about to eat Sasori ><)
~Mo-mo
LillithWinter
2009-08-11 . chapter 8
You are right..this story is very..wierd. But so well done, if you were able to, i think you could change the names of the people and sell it as a book. Every detail was done so well, you thought it was real. You never left anything out, people could fallow the story and not get lost. I hope you keep going, it keeps me on my toes. Haha, forgive my spelling, it may not be very great right now. ^.^
ChinaDollMaiden
2009-07-29 . chapter 8
Squee! Continue!!
andemoon
2009-07-28 . chapter 8
i like this story a lot n i been reading almost all ur stories
like i sayed before ur r a great writer=)
xDarakuxShitaxTenshix
2009-07-04 . chapter 8
is is rlly good! I love this story!
Gaaragirl2020
2009-06-08 . chapter 8
Great chapter! xD If you choose to continue, I'll be here! :) Amazing story!
lydia-chan
2009-05-18 . chapter 8
im so happy you're continuing this!:]
this was a great chapter too!:D
hm sakura's dream is questionable..what will happen?? ;o
i can't wait for the next one!:D
xXFoxy Scorpion BlossomXx
2009-05-17 . chapter 8
OMG LOVED IT! IT IS SO AWESOME! BUT DON'T MAKE SASORI DIE NO!! *SOBS IN CORNER* YOU SHOULD PUT SOME JEALOUSIE IN THERE!! LIKE MAKE SASUKE OR GAARA COME IN AND TRY TO TAKE SAKURA AND LIKE THEY KIDNAPE HER BECAUSE THEY ARE BAD AND THEY LIKE HER AND THAT IS WHY HE ENDS CUT UP BECAUSE THERE WAS A WAR OVER HER THE POSSIBILITIES! SO PLEZ UPDATE SOON!
Nyanonymous
2009-05-17 . chapter 8
hehe, i like this, i wasn't expecting it at all. if you do continue it, don't kill off any good characters, this story isn't fit to be depressing, and you'd ruin my, and probably many others, image of this story. if you do do something, make sakura get all possessive of sasori, it would be out of character, and could go hand in hand with the growing into an adult. it could also change her perception of believing all those ideals she'd had when she was younger. and it should be she who gets into the jealous cat fight... she could get hurt, but you could make it where it's not fatal it just hurts like a bitch. you could even make this like 50 years down the road, and watch sakura be pregnant, and hormone raging. and then some meany faced female, felis or no, openly hits on sasori... that would be a good, dramatic, funny story...
i think so at least...
O! how's it goin'? i haven't talked to you in forever. did you finaly buy those books you were talking about? i had this huge geography project we had to film the comedy and everything, i finally finished! but i feel bad cause i had to ditch my other group since i didn't have time to work with them on romeo and juliet... :(
chow
BlueSkyHeaven
2009-05-17 . chapter 8
~expecting even more quality and greatness from da Storm~ I can always count on you for some brilliant and unmatched SasoSaku that isn't as mainstream as the others! Always great work and great plot!
taida
2009-05-16 . chapter 8
I swear to god, if you kill any of them off, I will EAT you. Stupid, scary, not-prophetic dreams...

Will Sakura ever really express loving emotions (obvious ones) to Sasori directly? She's just so flippant all the time, I wish for once she could be somewhat serious. On a side note, OMG KIBAHINA WEDDING!! So cute. <3
freak-4-God
2009-05-16 . chapter 8
no no no, i like the fluffyness! please just leave the dream a dream! and even Kiba didn't know! he's like... her partner in crime!
freak-4-God
2009-04-06 . chapter 6
lol! pounced? i can so imagine that! are you going to make this fic M rated?
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