Reviews for A New Beginning

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Wise Night Raven 2008-05-31 ch 11,	abuseBeavers pwn. No doubt, no doubt. Nice chappie, per usual. But now I'm bugged on who Valentine killed. And how she's fighting herself. Although I have an idea... Nice school, too. Update!
lyhamia 2008-05-29 ch 11,	abuseoh! i want to know who valentine killed! lol, ember at matt are SO fluffy. but its sad that valentine has pushed alex away; they were good together! :D i'm liking very much this tower idea; each one represents an element ey? nice. and i like the way you guys had a conversation in the middle of the story- it was cute :D but what is all this talk of beavers? update soon!
lyhamia 2008-05-29 ch 10,	abusewhen in the heck did valentine become a murderer! i always thought of ember as the more...sadistic one :D although i like the way everything's completely turned around: as in matt and ember are all fluffy and alex and val are all...not, i expected everything to be different! but it turns out there is much of a past to valentine hey? oh and ember of course! update soon! i must know all! :D
lyhamia 2008-05-29 ch 9,	abuseeverything's getting a bit too fluffy for my liking! nah, i'm kidding, it's good! i like the build in tension between alex and vals convo- that was well done i must say! ...NEXT CHAPTER- WOOH!
lyhamia 2008-05-29 ch 8,	abuseOH NO! LOL at alex- manslag! oh no, thats not true, i like alex :D but what does matt want to tell Ember? I MUST KNOW!
lyhamia 2008-05-29 ch 7,	abuse...i hate that precious girl! how did you come up with that name anyways? is she from something? and what's kanstian magic? so many questions! i think i'm just a bit excited :D
lyhamia 2008-05-29 ch 6,	abuseEmber's angry and Valentine's a geek :D but i like her cleverness! It suits her :D but why is matt with scar?! what's going on with the world!?
lyhamia 2008-05-29 ch 5,	abuseNO! don't go with them- they are so not cool! :( i am not happy! Ember and Val (can i call her that?...it takes so long to type out valentine!) favourite part of this chapter: "My friends call me Scar." "So scarlet." HA!
lyhamia 2008-05-29 ch 4,	abusea ribbon is always the best way to show affection ;D so valentine can turn to water ey?...that rocks! really original, can ember do the same with fire? speedily moves to the next chapter!
lyhamia 2008-05-29 ch 3,	abuseOh no! Valentine! i like the fact her eyes are violet- i'm guessing some anime influences? "If you're gonna play with fire then you're gonna get burned." lol, that's a line!
lyhamia 2008-05-29 ch 2,	abuseOH! they blew up the school! i should really read ahead before i ask questions! i am very interested in seeing what kind of fighting they're going to do! i like your writing style...but this is two people right? so i guess that's writing styleS.
lyhamia 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is good! except what did Valentine and Ember do? Cause everyone seems to be acting as though they're in trouble? keep it up! ...on to the next chapter...
Wise Night Raven 2008-05-08 ch 10,	abuseWoah! Rewind! Murderer? Ember? Maybe. But Val never came off as the violent type... I'm not going to comment about the delay... But this one was really good.
valentine999 2008-04-12 ch 9,	abusei can't be bothered to PM you doll face so i'll just review you with it: i am very much liking the editing of this chapter, someone's becoming a bit of an expert! update soon...:D
Wise Night Raven 2008-04-11 ch 9,	abuseAh! An update!! O.O Woah. Never would'a saw that commin'. At all. But not bad. Not bad at all. Let's all see where this goes, shall we?

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