Is this story going to be continued or is it discontinued? Because it wasn't in the list of your WIPs...

Anyway, I couldn't find any critiques for this chapter. :)

I loved how Shego automatically wanted Kim to do her "homework". ;)
I also loved how Shego reserved a seat for her favorite student. ;) Kim, if you can't figure out that Shego loves you and you secretly love her too, you need to go to the doctor. "got a case of a love bipolar..." *sings*
Everybody else: O_o
Hahha. Sorry. XD

Great job as usual! :)

1. "Here, Dad!" The boys' said in unison - I don't think that apostraphe (sp?) is necessary there.
2. grumpily walked to join the others - You forgot a period after 'others'.
3. The twin grabbed - The twins. ;)
4. Mr. Possible said in atone that ended any - There needs to be a space between "a" and "tone".
5. "Fine... I start first." better - Better, not better. It's the start of a sentence. ;)

I like how Kim's parents don't have a clue that she's Shego, though that would also be a little out of character.

And yes, Kim, you do like it. ;) Shego's such a flirt. ;)

Waiting for my science teacher to get an email from this other teacher who's grading my test.

After this, only 2 more and I'll have read all your (non-M rated) Kim Possible stories (not counting "So The Switch". It's just been SO long since I've seen Teen Tians. :/)

Anyway...

1. She'd wishsomething would happen - I think you mean "she wished something would happen".
2. And it most definitely obvious there was. - There needs to be a "was" after "it".
3. that look iscriminal - Just like number 1, there needs to be a space between "is" and "criminal".
4. They walked pass the various classrooms - I think you mean "They walked past" or "They passed".
5. nose and walked right past him, - You have a comma at the end of the sentence when there shouldn't be one.
6. I think when Shego asked Kim to go into her car, Kim would say something like "but... I still have more classes..." Then again, it's probably at the end of the day, so ignore that.
7. "Is green and black..." - "Is" should be replaced by "are" since there are two colors, not one.

Hahha. Wow Kim, you really shouldn't have brought up Miss Go. Wait until your parents figure out Miss Go's really Shego. XD

I love how Kim just forgets what she was originally going to do when she got into Shego's car. Kim, don't get obsessed with the car! If you do, Shego will get jealous of the car! ;D

awesome chapters and awesome story.. i thought you had ditched this story.. i really hope you'll update soon...

oh... and another thing.. there's no car with the name SLR F1.. its McLaren F1 and Mercedes-Benz McLaren SLR... two different cars.. just a small mistake..


update fast ^^



Wirenfeldt Jr

nuo to short!
...damn tease!
Anyway thx for the udpate!

good story

wow, what has gotten into her? with shego being ms. go again... hmm, really need some updates here... thank you...

lol that was funny/cute. i would have 'eeped' if it had been me. anyways please update soon this could be good. its funny thats for sure

As soon as I read the song that Kim got, I was majorly smiling, lol, I love that song!!

Um, yeah, anyway lol...I really like this, I...I dont know what to say really.

Oh, n when I read the description of what Shego was wearing, I was thinking that the clothes people are put in in fanfics are ridiculous, but then when I read what you said after it made me laugh loads lol.

Update soon, please :D

this story is off the chain! i hope you can update sometime soon Xd i'd love to read more of it.

This story is so Awsome!MORE SOON!

this is a really good story keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!

good chapter

update really soon

hey! nice start, and love the car XD update soon ;) wann see more of it