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| vincents1lover 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseLOL!!OMG FUNNY!!I LVOE IT!MAKe more storys lik this? |
| Zafiro Okami 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseFunny ^.^! |
| xcloudx 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseAw this was great! |
| Anaeli 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseHEY! GREAT STORY! I CAN SEE THEM DOING THOSE THINGS AND HAVING PETTY ARGUMENTS! KEEP WRITING! |
| Another Illusion 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! It was really well-written, humourous and so in-character. You wrote the whole Bobby taunting Jack aspect very well in particular. Great job, I hope you'll do more in this fandom :) AI |
| Queen Jane Approximately 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was great. I liked it a lot -- very funny, all the humor was perfect. And yay for "Stairway"! "“Oh, Bobby, that’s ugly,” Evelyn muttered." -- That was my favorite line ever, lol. Fantastic! :D Peace, Queen Jane |
| Ghostwriter 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| Sparks Diamond 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abusegreat job! it was very funny! |
| Maxiekat 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseBirdie, I laughed out loud so many times while reading this. The dialogue was terrific and you did a good job with making each brother different and keeping them in character. Isn't Bobby fun to write? He's such an ass but he's so funny. Great job! |