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Reviews For: Circuit Breaker

vincents1lover
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abuseLOL!!OMG FUNNY!!I LVOE IT!MAKe more storys lik this?
Zafiro Okami
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abuseFunny ^.^!
xcloudx
2008-03-13
ch 1,
abuseAw this was great!
Anaeli
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abuseHEY!
GREAT STORY! I CAN SEE THEM DOING THOSE THINGS AND HAVING PETTY ARGUMENTS!
KEEP WRITING!
Another Illusion
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abuseI loved this! It was really well-written, humourous and so in-character. You wrote the whole Bobby taunting Jack aspect very well in particular.
Great job, I hope you'll do more in this fandom :)
AI
Queen Jane Approximately
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuseThis was great. I liked it a lot -- very funny, all the humor was perfect. And yay for "Stairway"!

"“Oh, Bobby, that’s ugly,” Evelyn muttered." -- That was my favorite line ever, lol.

Fantastic! :D

Peace,
Queen Jane
Ghostwriter
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuseGreat job. Catch ya on the flip side.
Sparks Diamond
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abusegreat job! it was very funny!
Maxiekat
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuseBirdie, I laughed out loud so many times while reading this. The dialogue was terrific and you did a good job with making each brother different and keeping them in character. Isn't Bobby fun to write? He's such an ass but he's so funny.

Great job!
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