OMG That was so freakin funny! I laughed so hard I cried! Great Job!

Yes! I was crying! THAT WAS WUCKING HILARIOUS!

I cried because I laughed too much.
This is SPARTA! (err. I mean Awesome :])

This was hilarious. Loved the Sequel too.

The funniness of this story is attacking me!

I Loved the Mcdonald's part,"do you got the goods"! And i loved when she threw off her two socks.You should write a sequel!

Brilliant! I love drunk Bella and the nugget drugs! Best part was the mcdonald run!!

Oh, my goodness. That was hilarious!
I loved Bella's rap, in particular. LOL! :)

OH.MY.CULLENS. I think that is the most hilariuos thing i have ever read in my life ABOUT BELLA i love the part about the im ready for my checkup.BY THE WAY I LAUGHED UNTIL I CRIED AND THAT IS A PRETTY HARD THING TO DO.8-D

"Do you have the goods?" haha! I almost peed my pants!

so i am doing a 10 page paper. so obvi i am on FF...anyways my day was ** till i read that! way to go!

Best. Edward/Bella story. EVER.

this was so funny. I loved it. great job

GOOD STORY!

this was so funny :)x