 lunar101 3/24/04 . chapter 1Pretty good! |
 jennyjennai 5/26/03 . chapter 1Emotionally charged, reading this caused me to smile and have a tear in my eye - it was just so sweet... No, more like bitter-sweet. Having Ryoga and Ranma in there was funny as well. This was a very nice fic. |
 I love Drabble 3/22/03 . chapter 1wow... such a good story |
 anon 12/16/02 . chapter 1 Sad, but ver realistic feeling. I have always thought that any relationship between Naru and Keitaro would fail - she's too broken emotionally as a character. Anyway I appreciate the writing - again it was very good! |
 morningafter2 11/25/02 . chapter 1Whaaaa! I was never a big fan of Su and Keitaro, but to see her leave like that, it broke my heart. I didn't figure out that it was Ranma and Ryoga who messed up the appartment until I read the A/N. Please write another chapter where they get (back?) together. |
 dragonsmage 10/6/02 . chapter 1 You know this is the first story I'll seen with KeitaroSu as a pairing.Not a bad pairing I must say.Kind of tired of reading fics with it being Naru or Shino being pair up with Keitaro. DSM |
 ShootinGuy 8/25/02 . chapter 1Incredibly sad (I DO know how he feels...)... and yet, incredibly good... |
 Duran the Warrior 5/16/02 . chapter 1Not bad; though it seems incomplete; that and Ramma in his male form has black hair (he only has red hair in his female form) |
 Kana Himezaki 5/2/02 . chapter 1Really sad.
While I do't like the Naru/Keitaro pairing, it is a bit hard to imagine Kaolla and Keitaro. Mainly because she treats him more like an older brother.
It's still good though. |
 Only Yuri 12/29/01 . chapter 1wow, that was great...one of the few stories i've read where the grammar was good *whew thx for that* anyway, good fic, write more! :Þ |
 TorankusuGohan 12/28/01 . chapter 1I thought it was really well written! I'm not used to the Kaolla pairing with Keitaro, either, but I like this! |
 Digi Mistress Sakura I forgot to sign in 11/21/01 . chapter 1 That was interesting. It uh..sorta surprised me. I've only seen the first 5 eps or so. |
 kelsey wheelhouse 11/5/01 . chapter 1 hey chris!
Meesh gave me the URL so i thought that I would check your story out!
It's good...i'm very impressed...do you have any other works?
I love to read fan fics...if you have any gundam wing i will love you forever...
but anyway great story! |
 Joanchan 10/18/01 . chapter 1WOW! Great story. Though, I don't think it should be rated as G. Maybe G, PG, or even PG13 but that's one heck of a great story! Keep writing! |
 kuya 10/4/01 . chapter 1 i like it very much, a whole thing, the scene, the style that Su has in the story, just love it |