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| silvermedal 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was cool! I love the way you used Lupin's past and present and the way those events mirror each other. You'd think maybe he'd learn from his mistakes - that maybe he'd realize that people do care about him - but silly Remus, he has to be all emo. :-P Great story! |
| CSISnape 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI don't think the style is bad at all. I quite enjoy it actually. This is a newer perspective on Remus compared to what I've read. Do more characters like this, it's really well written. |