i already like it :D

more please :D

totally and utterly awesome!

love your story :]

update soon!

I love it so far, this seems really good! Update soon!

-JF

Story is great so far! Please update soon!

awesome chapter! not that you need one, but could i be your editor (just so i can get the stories first, lol)?

p.s. update as soon as you can!

haha..the ending was super funny

keep writing. i love the idea.

OH.

Would that be a site to see?

HELL YES!

-Holly.

ooh :D

cant wait for more!:D

please update soon!:D :D :D :D

cant wait for the awkward encoutours..update soon..

Oh..."GOOD GAWD"!

BUT, I you put "how's it in florida?" or something like that, is it supposed to be that way?

anywho, yo amo!

es muy bien, MUY MUY MUY BIEN!

*giggles*

*sigh*

*imagines Edward ripped*

*shudders uncontrollably*

enough with the ** okey dokey. I love love love it!

hmm, okay, so I think you should have Emmett make some crude joke or something that makes BOTH Bella AND Edward blush uncontrollably, and then have Bella sprint out of the room, suddenly realizing what she has walked into, and have Edward cuss at Emmett, thinking that Emmett's comment made Bella run, so Edward goes tearing after her, still shirtless if I might add, going to explain Emmetts horrible manners :)

OMG.

-lower jaw hit the ground-

Their first encounter is wonderful. Edward shirtless...

-trying to picture it myself-

AWW 0/o

I like it so far. um one question are the Cullens still vampires or are they humans? Cuz i think i may have a nice plot for you, not sure yet though.

Very intresting in a good way.

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