Wow. This is really good, usually Light gets raped or kidnapped by B. Nice turn of the tables.

This story is absolutely amazing. I was just checking out your profile and how you said you needed to rework this story, and might even take it down. Don't, honestly. That is by far the best LightL story have every read. By far. Your writing style nearly flawless, as is how you write the characters themselves. And the plots, and psychological component, and just...everything...is beautifully done. Absolutely professional work. Please don't give up on it yet :] It's brillaint, and I really hope you'll see it through until the end.

dude its been a year. you really should update.
This is a very good story and it isn't good to make people wait so please update the story

~E.B.R

Wow, this is an awesome story!

love it! hope you udpate soon!XD

I love this story, the psycological aspects are amazing. Though I just want to say something about B. We know he has a psychotic obsession with dominating L, to the point of killng random people, stalking, and eventually raping him. Just because he wants to see L develop a similar obsession like the one B, himself has. But, when he sees Light being close to L it sends him into a rage and he swears to kill Light, because Light wasn't good enough for L??

So to sum it up B thinks L it too good for other humans, and in dominating L he automatically becomes better than other people. This is my theory as to why B so obsessed with dominating L or becoming his sucsessor. Sorry to bother you with my babble, but I just wanted to make things a little clearer. Anyways, I love your story and update soon.

This story's pretty neat. It's interesting how everything's turning out and such. I'm really curious about the next victim (male, you say?) and when B and Raito meet next. :)

Please update soon!

please update this fic!! *begging with puppy eyes^^* will you??

i hope you'll get ur inspiration back soon XD


i'll be waiting for u then, take care^^

With Love,
Sioen

Dang, that was cruel. Everybody has a breaking point, and now I'm looking forward to seeing BB reach his.

need more please... T-T creepy... how can B see life spans? did he get a note bookk when he was youn and kill his own parents? no... was he born with it? hm... i want to know!! i shall await the next chapter with bated breath.

what a wonderful story! I think you characterized L and BB perfectly; however, I can't help but find Light to not be as smart as he was in the series. but all the same, this is one of the best fics i've ever read! so update soon!

OH. MY. GOD. I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!
Please update as SOON as your schedule allows!! This is one of my favorite DN fanfics! I really like how psychotic BB is. It's actually starting to creep me out how well you write his POV... Lol just kidding! Maybe not... Anyways keep up the good work! I have this tabbed so I'll check it everyday! ^^
And WHEN will we get to see some Light/L smut? I simply cannot wait for that part. Hee hee ok I'm done now. Sorry I talk so much! BAI!

wow! this story is the best and i love it! can't wait to read more.

I’m really enjoying this story. :) The premise is really original and interesting - and I love your post-series version of Light; it’s so nice to get to read about him being kind and good after everything he does in the series. XDD I’m looking forward to finding out what happens! :)

great story !
you write so well, I loved how you described their feelings
I'm hoping for a nice LightxL love story ,
Light is so nice in this fic , I really like him , he's so kind ...
I don't like BxL so I'm hoping there won't be hints of a possible relationship between them ,L belongs to Light !^_^
please update soon cuz I want to show this fic to all of my friends
( my brother really likes this fic , and that's a new one cuz he generally doesn't like dn fics )
PS...and yes , well , happyendings are always nice you know ...