Great job. I'm really enjoying it. I can't wait to read the rest. You should definently write one with Ronon. I would love to read it.

Oh no! You can't leave it there - I want to know what happens next! This was really sweet ... nice to imagine a softer, more open John who'd be willing to put himself where you've put him. You must write more! Cheers

Lucky us! Two updates in a day! Definitely made my day even brighter than before :D

Thanks for this, i love your writing! Totally worth reading.

Cant wait til the muse strikes you again! :D

Suzi

Yay! You updated! You dont know how long i have been waiting for you to update this story! *sigh*

This has totally made my day so much better :D

Cant wait for more! And i hope the muse hits you on your Ronon story soon too ;)

Thanks for sharing!

Suzi

Hey! Where is the rest of this?

Please get your muse to come visit you again on this,because i definitely think its worth continuing...

Not just for the fact that for a few minutes a day i can imagine myself in Atlantis *sigh*

Great writing!

Suzi

Great job. I am enjoyng it.

Heh, now this is something im really interested in reading more of! Fluff is always good with me, and this sort of fluff is especially good ( nice dreams ;) )

Consider writing more? PM me, i can give you the link of a site that i belong to. We are only a small bunch of gals, but if you posted this stuff here (Supernatural stuff too) then it would be a huge hit!

Loved it!

Suzi

omg i love it! they are so adorable!

love the story! i cant wait to read more.