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Reviews for: Courtroom Drama
P. Babble-Fish
2008-04-18 . chapter 1
Lol, I think I almost died of laughter
Ron Weasley
2008-03-15 . chapter 1
You have a fic similar to this haven't you? Why didn't you replace it with this edited one?

If you look at it this way, Goku's actually five hundred and eighteen years old or perhaps older. Old enough to be their grandfather three times over! Sorry, that was ranting.Muaha. Er but Yeah, I know I'm being a nitpicker here really, but I think your Social worker is quite forced and a tad cliched. Maybe you could've you know, thought through the plot a little more and not rush the whole thing?
I do think Sanzo and Goku are absolutely wonderful together and that Sanzo would be thoroughly disturbed and smoke like five sticks at a go(Er kidding.)if Goku were to be taken away but your portrayal of Sanzo was a bit drastic. Like a mental emo kid. I suppose it could've been better. Yeah but who am I to judge anyway? People do appreciate your fic, so yeah, good for you too.

Cheers!
RW
jarm
2008-03-13 . chapter 1
Read this somewhere before, cute.
Kitesvara
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
This is very funny but have you posted it somewhere before? I'm sure I've seen it before.
space-cadet6
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
Wow. That was excellent. I remember reading something like this a while back, but I'm glad you re-edited so much. It really made it more enjoyable to read. Good Job!
arugula
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
that was funny:D hahaha
Luvlessgirl68
2008-03-10 . chapter 1
all of the above i love this story.
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