 Ron Weasley 2008-03-15 . chapter 1You have a fic similar to this haven't you? Why didn't you replace it with this edited one?
If you look at it this way, Goku's actually five hundred and eighteen years old or perhaps older. Old enough to be their grandfather three times over! Sorry, that was ranting.Muaha. Er but Yeah, I know I'm being a nitpicker here really, but I think your Social worker is quite forced and a tad cliched. Maybe you could've you know, thought through the plot a little more and not rush the whole thing?
I do think Sanzo and Goku are absolutely wonderful together and that Sanzo would be thoroughly disturbed and smoke like five sticks at a go(Er kidding.)if Goku were to be taken away but your portrayal of Sanzo was a bit drastic. Like a mental emo kid. I suppose it could've been better. Yeah but who am I to judge anyway? People do appreciate your fic, so yeah, good for you too.
Cheers!
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