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| wiccachick54 2008-06-17 ch 1,  | abuseI don't think it's an odd pairing at all. Derek and Cameron are pure heat and you did a great job of capturing the attraction as well as Derek's inner conflict. I look forward to reading more! |
| Arina2 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseYou described the angst and the tension between Derek and Cameron very well. The ending was perfect. What can I say? Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. Thank you for writing this story. Arina |
| ABC Girl 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI'm SO glad there is someone else out ther who sees the potential for a Derek/Cameron 'ship! There's TONS of angst and secrets to be explored here. Very nicely done! Andie |
| SupernaturalGal6 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseI love that you made it seem like they had something in the furture, but then the trust was broken...awsome story! |
| simone 2008-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseso good |
| Elliesmeow 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseHmm..I'm interested to see where you take this concept. As much as I enjoy the UST(and let's hope it stays that way, unresolved) between Derek and Sarah I gotta say a relationship between Cameron and Derek is far more interesting. After all, he's lived the future they;re fighting to prevent. Machines have changed the face of the world, the order of nature and killed his family. He's gonna have issues with Cameron regardless of their past, and that past is of great interest to me. Can't wait to read more. Please go on. -Ellie |
| RubyFresh 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, It shed some light on the Derick and Cameron relationship. Besides John and Cameron, I think I like this shipping two. Any-who, great job! Hope to read more from you! =] |
| astropixie 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI didn't really see how this had to be classified as romance between Derek and Cameron. It seemed like more of a "missing scene" describing Cameron's creepiness. If the pairing is making you self conscious, like you hinted in the author's note, you could easily take out the "she enthralls me" line. I absolutely loved this scene in the show, and I swear I saw him start to tear up a little. You chose an excellent scene to go off of, and I really liked your expansion. |