 hirokiri9 5/20/12 . chapter 14Okay, so I really loved this story up until Naruto gets kidnapped by Akatsuki. I normally don't mind actions scenes but I was hoping that there would have been more development between Itachi and Sakura. Not to say this isn't a good story, it's great, just not my cup of tea, at the moment. Plus, with certain characters dying sort of ruined it for me. I was hoping for a happy ending, but couldn't really feel it because of certain deaths that occurred. I hope I'm not being rude because your story definitely drew me in but I found it lacking towards the very end. I guess I was just hoping for more fluff (haha, lame I know). But all in all, great story, and I really love the way you capture everyones emotions. Well done. Keep up the great work! _ |
 Namikaze Mean 4/16/12 . chapter 14Ah, this was so sad! /
I can't even find any other words. It was great. I applaud you.
xoxo, Mean-chan |
 froztherz 3/16/12 . chapter 12I love this fic so much but it's pissing me off how weak Sasuke appears to be, and how strong Sakura appears to be. It's supposed to be the other way around. Yes, Sakura is no longer the weak genin, but this is too much lol how the hell did she learn the Uchiha Clan's fireball technique? That's just bs. XD
I still love the fic though. But god Sasuke is annoying and weak in this fic. |
 0.0' Kahli hime 2/25/12 . chapter 14Oh gril, you have so many great Itasakus in here. Thanks for sharing D |
 xLL-Ax 2/12/12 . chapter 14Wow, I loved your story. I thank you for completing this story, even if you didn't really want to anymore.
Amazing job, i loved it D |
 Sexy-Blossom 1/28/12 . chapter 1This is awsome |
 BlueKnightMar 1/19/12 . chapter 4Dude, I freaking love your Sakura! |
 BlueKnightMar 1/19/12 . chapter 2Hello! I'm loving this story and I gotta say that I find Itachi in this chapter very in character! I like your AU! Nice job overall. |
 Heiwa no Hato 1/3/12 . chapter 14This was a very well-written story. It was quite saddening to see many die, but it made the story more realistic. This story is one of the best stories that I have ever read. It showed the happiness, pain, sorrow and the anger of the characters well. I loved it. Good job! :) |
 Rebecca 12/25/11 . chapter 14 I absolutly loved this story! The battle scenes made me gasp and worry, the tender moments between Itachi and Sakura made me smile. And I cried when the different characters died, I had to get a tissue. But I loved every minute of it! Keep up the good work. |
 lunamaria 11/16/11 . chapter 14 OMG...THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC EVER...TRULY!-FOR THE LOVE OF GOD,I CRY VERY HARD EVER SINCE SAI DIED..WOW!great story by the way,,,keep up writing,yeah... |
 NatsukakonemeYuubasa 11/10/11 . chapter 3Letting his head fall down his chest? Can his neck bend that way? LOL Shisui's awesome! The story is by far, pretty amzing and awesome. Keep up the great work! C: |
 Ava Whitlock 11/10/11 . chapter 14you killed sasuke...?
damn you *dramatically*...DAMN YOU!
just kidding...
:P
AWESOME STORY...
:D |
 Sirius-Black-is-not-dead 11/9/11 . chapter 8Maybe this is just nitpicking, but it bugged me a little bit when Sakura tell's Fugaku "I am the Hokage's apprentice and the third kunoichi in the whole village." It really bugs me since I can name like 6 female ninjas in the Leaf off the top of my head, and then some for the future ninjas like Hinabi and that one girl that hangs out with Konahamaru. Otherwise, I like this story a lot. |
 Mel 10/20/11 . chapter 14 D': holy moly... what an emotional battle! Excellent story Zelha i could go back and read it again right now, thank you for the opportunity to read this story, i hate it (and tear up) when anyone dies only cuz i love the characters so much but i still really enjoyed reading this story, i couldn't stop.
Cheers :) |