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| Marissaboo 2008-03-20 ch 2, | abuseoo update soon! There way be a lot of flashbacks but they are interesting. =) |
| Marissaboo 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseomg Fai i am like almost crying! Great Job on it! =( I wonder how the other greasers are gonna react. Most likely really badly. I shall read the next chapter to find out. |
| GoldenMerlin 2008-03-18 ch 2, | abuseWow. This is pretty good. You have characterization down, and you're a pretty good writer. You portray emotions very well. You also have a strong plot/conflict. Great :) |
| Lisaa. 2008-03-13 ch 2, | abusethis is really good! Lisa |
| GreaserSodapopLover4Life 2008-03-13 ch 2, | abuseI liked this! Update soon! |
| Deanaholic1 2008-03-13 ch 2, | abusevery very very awesome chapter, can't wait for more, update asap:) |
| Miss.Ponyboy.Curtis 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseWOW, i'm really liking this story so far. Please continue! By the way, it was only rushed a teensy-weensy bit at the end. Other than that it was really good |
| Deanaholic1 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseIT WAS AWESOME, ONLY A LITTLE RUSHED BUT OTHER WISE AWESOME! |
| Mrs.Two-BitMatthews 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseO I teared up a little! That's really really good! |
| GreaserSodapopLover4Life 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat Job! I liked it alot! Please update soon! |