Reviews for On Celebrating Birthdays

Reviews For: On Celebrating Birthdays

Lory DJ 2008-07-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery good, liked it very much!
Kenji Ogami 2008-06-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseGood fiction, you have talent. It's been a long time since I read a Bloody Roar fiction and I have to congratulate you for the story, send me your AIM by e-mail, hope you remember me from Bloody Roar 5 fiction. I liked your romance fiction too, the first one I read wrote by you about Kenji and Uriko, I'm waiting to read your next chapter and next fanfiction.
Razer Athane 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuseSo cute. You portrayed both Yugo and Kenji very well. Nice job :)
Francisco Devilman Warrior 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseNot bad not bad at all. Keep it up
Tiger5913 2008-03-11 ch 1,	abuseD: is still lamenting the loss of the next part of Blindside I ish very saddened by that... sniffle But I'm glad you did NOT lose this story too, because if you had, well, then I know you would've been really upset. ^^0 Now onto comments for the story: okay, the shopping scene was funny. I'm sure Yugo can think of many other things he'd rather do than go shopping, so he's very nice to do that for his new kid brother... and Kenji's response kind of made me smile, hehehe. Using language higher than he should be at his current age... damn impressive. Kenji always seems like he's 15 going on 30 or something, huh? Must be the whole tragic past angle, hmm. HAHAHA! He picked the yellow one! Kenji likes bright colors! XD Which is... not really appropriate for a ninja, because it's like waving a huge flag announcing your presence, but I guess if Naruto can wear blaringly bright orange, Kenji can wear a yellow ninja gi or shirt if he chooses. (Yellow looks better than orange anyway, IMO. ^^0) Bah... some of Kenji's remarks make me sad. ;_; It looks like Tylon really, really messed up his mind. Well, let's all blame it on Busuzima - he is the brainwashing expert, and we know he played a big role in screwing around with people's fragile mental states. was laughing when Kenji told Gado Happy Birthday instead of the other way around Oh dear... Um, Yugo really does need to explain to Kenji the concept of a birthday, and very clearly. :P Good to see that the next couple of years were good to him... unfortunately, when he's 14, he's going to be in some trouble with the ZLF, oh-ho-ho... =/ I know what's coming... sigh Put up the next part soon, ya hear? But I'd like to see Blindside first, hehehe! sheepish grin Kenji and Uriko have been waiting for a long time to go on their first date with each other, ya know? Please, before they die of old age or something. XD Oh, one thing I noticed that was a little odd was the fact that Kenji had already been referred to by his name in the first part of the story, but then it isn't until the very last part of this segment that Yugo officially gave him a name. Was Yugo perhaps just calling the kid "Kenji" in his mind this whole time, before deciding to make it his official name? Just wondering. ^_^

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