This made me 'aw' so hard XD The last sentence was just perfect, in any way that you choose to interpret it. There's room for all sorts of bad puns using Yamamoto and Gokudera's rings, but every so often you get a really awesome play on words, like this one.

When I clicked on the story, I was slightly shocked at how short it is! But the actual story was beautifully written. I hope you keep on writing. Wonderful job!

My love for Gokudera and Yamamote has just soared up and out the roof.

Thank-you for the feelings and the perfectly crafted ficlet.
Loved it, as per usual :)

It´s so beautiful this fic! I love it!

Wow... so simple, yet so beutiful.

You have a real nack for writing. You should do some longer stories. I'd read em. ;)