:O That could work! Brilliant!
Great Job!
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Alauralen sent me over to read this story. The bare emotions from Michael are heart-wrenching. I've always felt badly for him on the show, and this nearly made me cry. For him to lose the one person he cared for most would certainly lead him down the path of darkness for good. Excellent job capturing the emotion and pain of the characters.

*waves* I read your post on the Michael/Teyla thread and came right over to read this. It was so poingant and you could truly feel poor Michael's pain. The whole story makes so much sense. You did a great job of tying so many elements of TLM and I think you captured Michael's character. Thank you for sharing! I really enjoyed this.

Sad but nice story. I kind of wish Mihael was more like this instead of a crazy, confused, nut job. lol.

Intersting, I like it. An orginal look at an event, that of right now we know little about. I also like how you give Michael a good side that is battling with a darkside, but it is destoryed by her death. Good job.