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| Ariellen 2008-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseThis is cute! I agree with the reviewers who say it would be nice to see it expanded. Watch your proofreading; "Nancy" is spelled "Nacy" at one point, and "Andalasia Fashions" and "Central Park" should be capitalized. The characterization seems good, I just wish we got to see more. |
| misken67 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseIt was a really good idea, and well written as well. However, the entire idea would only work if you made it longer! You rushed nearly every scene of it, and to a person who had never seen the movie, it would make absolutely no sense. (No, I don't want you to introduce the characters again) I want you to add more detail, more description, and more plot. That would make this fic a B fic to an A fic. |
| daughter-of-the-true-king 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseVery good, but it seemed a little rushed. The idea was wonderful (I'll probably do something like it myself one day) but I really think you could've gotten more out of it. More description, more dialouge...but overall, it was good. :) |
| driver picks the music 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good!! I love this movie! |
| Dancer - Miley Wannabe 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI love this! It fits perfectly! xoxo |
| LivvyxBaby 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseThat's all your writing for this story?! |
| Princess Aravis 2008-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is sweet. could be longer, though. |
| Shalia74 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseNice little one shot...very cute...I loved it. :) Don't listen to that stupid anonymous review before me...Some people just want to stir trouble. |
| Rejhan 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseAwe, very sweet!! Nice work! ^_^ |
| enchantedgirl 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseCute little story. Well done. |