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| icemaster91 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abusekeep going what happens next |
| Autumn Whispers 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseApparently I gave you too much of my insperation... I was before wondering why you were writing a sequel to TUCaFoYYH, but then I saw that it was unrelated... ^_^;; So, like a warewolf, she changes when the full moon appears?...I find it funny that Hiei didn't instantly resonize her, though. If she was HIS, then wouldn't he reconize someone instantly? And I'm wondering what "baka" (I'm guessing it's an insult...) and "onna" means, also. :) |
| jojo 2008-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell written. I don't know much about this japaneze stuff like "onna" and "baka" but i still enjoyed the moment and could grasp the intention. I like the predicament given to the reluctant Hiei. I liked how he comes across quite repressive of concern and emotion (like most guys), but ends up doing the most ultimate romantic thing -- kissing Zura in her worst moment! That says more than words could ever do!! I like this guy. I also liked how Zura handled her most embarassing, awkward moment -- with humor and hope. GOOD JOB "shredder" Keep up the good work and you'll become a GREAT writer. Ever thought of writing teen romances. . . CLEAN ones that is. |
| littlekawaiifirefox 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuse*sigh* so subtle, yet...so romantic!! :3 i love it!! |