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| SnowCharms 2008-05-28 ch 2, | abuseThat was indeed pathetic...u do not beg 4 reviews! U should ask 4 opinions n thoughts on this story so that u can imrove ur skills...d language barrier will definitely be interesting...pls tell me that Kaoru has a gadjet 2 help Kenshin undertand her...update! |
| persephonesfolly 2008-05-23 ch 2, | abuseIt's not your average AU, that's for sure. Don't know how Kenshin with a spear instead of a sword will play out, but at least the plot idea is refreshingly unique. |
| An Ash Tree 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abuseThe plot pretty interesting, and different. Kaoru seems to be getting over the fact that she stuck in the past pretty fast, or maybe she's in denial/shock. I like it a bit so far. But please, don't complain about reviews. You have the anonymous reviews blocked so they can't review and when you do complain, it's, frankly, quite annoying, and makes me (personally) want to review less. Uh, besides that, keep writing. :) |
| The White tiger Natsumi-Sam... 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abuseI realy think you should write more, its so very uique. It realy makes me think about stuff. How is kaoru going to get back? how will things change, or are they ment to be the same? why cant kenshin speak? ...what does he smell like? are more rabbits going to be eateded..did..ed? lol update soon please? :D |
| forevermine 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseWow...very unique plot. I'm quite intrigued and look forward to seeing where you take it. -Forevermine |
| cutepuff 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is just like a Back to the Future plot where someone gets to travel to the past. I hope Kenshin isn't a cannibal that decides to cook up Kaoru! ;) Please update soon! |
| krystalMage 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseGawd! I wrote a review and submitted just to find out that I wasn't logged in! crap! Anyway, I liked the premise of your story. I'm sure I've never read anything like this. I mean I have never seen Kaoru get flung into the Stone Ageso I'm really curious about what will happen next. Are Sano and the gang going to end up there with her or will she have to fend for herself on her own? I hope not and I hope she's got a weapon. By the looks of things, she's gonna need one. Great going! I'm hoping you update soon. P.S. I like Orlando Bloom and Yul Brynner too. |
| The White tiger Natsumi-Sam... 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseI think...I love you. this is SUCH a diffrent plot than everything else...you are a genous.. have you seen 10 bc? thats the first thingit made me think of... actors..acting like cave men..with realy white teeth..and perfict english.. haahh..lol anyway, write more |
| Scarred Sword Heart 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseLet's see how Kaoru fares in the ancient past. |