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| Yemi Hikari 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseThere is a major problem in believability for this fic. The Gryphador fireplace would not be conected to the Flo network. If it were some other place, I might believe it. And... ignore Flame Rising... the idea is believable, just not where they are starting from. I really suggest for everyone to add him to their block list as he never helps but just bullies. |
| AgRose001 2008-06-17 ch 7, | abuseplease update soon |
| ShioriAyano 2008-06-15 ch 7, | abuse:) i liked it alot! Continue, or in your words, i narn heria! |
| Paws.on.scroll 2008-06-15 ch 2, | abuseOh this is so wicked! I love HP/LOTR x/o's. You have 'romance' added? I admit that part caught my attention most for this story. Just out of curiosity! I'm just hoping it's NOT going to follow canon in HP. That's all I can hope. |
| L.A.H.H. 2008-06-14 ch 7, | abuseHave a great time! Wonderful chapter! (I still love your disclaimers :D) |
| wolfawaken 2008-06-13 ch 7, | abuseHave a nice time and do not worry about the update. I will still be here to read when you are back. |
| Utena-Puchiko-nyu 2008-06-05 ch 6, | abuseI love it! Please continue! Kisses from Argentina! |
| caramellxkissx 2008-06-05 ch 2, | abuseis it the fact that they came fromEngland and not Scotland? (where hogwarts is i think) I couldn't find anything else, except maybe the floo network/parralell thing. |
| Polly Danderfluff-Mrs. Hawk... 2008-06-02 ch 6, | abuseNice! I love the fact that Ron doesn't like the elves and the thoughts he has on them. PD-Mrs.H |
| xspollyx 2008-06-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseKeep it going! I love it! I like the fact that Harry isn't above, or too "pure" to feel the pull of the ring, like in some other stories. |
| Cairo Sinclair 2008-05-30 ch 6, | abuseI really like this story! It's really good! Make more chapters please! Cuz its really good! :) |
| Rockcrab 2008-05-29 ch 6, | abuseSorry I took so long... Been busy. Great chapter by the way. Really great chapter... Sincerely, Rockcrab |
| caramellxkissx 2008-05-27 ch 6, | abusei really like it!! But you made a mistake-one of the seven laws of wizardness or something says that you can't transfigure food or water.don't ask me how i know this, i read too much hp. yeah only someone nitpickity as me would find it, but still, just lettin ya know. Great idea though, this fic. Update soonn |
| Flame Rising 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseLet’s play a game, shall we? Yes? Fantastic. This game is called “Things That Can Write Better Than You”. The rules are simple. Please correctly select which choice can write better than you: A. My left testicle B. A toilet-full of chunky diarrhea C. An inbred midget clown who swims in choice B D. All of the above If you chose the correct answer, D, then you have won the following prize: A spot in my coveted C2 “Stories A Turd Out of My ** Could Write Better” (which, strangely enough was not one of the choices). Don’t despair! Even if you didn’t choose correctly, I will be kind enough to give you that prize anyway. Who said I don’t have a heart? Congratulations! Please continue to avoid the dictionary as if it were an oozing, puss-filled sore on an old hooker’s a.s.s. And good grammar? Well, run away from it like it’s a festering syphilitic itch you just can’t scratch in public. Or in words you can understand: your fic sucks donkey balls, and that’s what you wanted me to think, right? Because otherwise, I’d have to believe this was an actual attempt at writing and laugh the crap right out of myself. Best regards, F/R |
| JuMiKu 2008-05-27 ch 6, | abuseI do agree that Harry would be tempted as well. Those on whose shoulders rest many people's lives, naturally strive for its power, because it fools them into believing it could help them keep those people safe. |