When I read this story for the first time almost a year ago it scared the living daylight out of me, if I remember corectly it was also one of the first yaoi and one of the first M rated stories I've ever read, and although I was disgusted by it (I don't like horror in general, too much gore and too little plot for my liking) I also remember being fascinated by it.

I loved your writing style and just how dark everything was. Especially the way you wrote young Tala was simply great.

To give you an indication of your writing skills, I've read a lot of Stephen King and I've read the whole Hannibal Lecter series but none of those book made this, uncomfortable, disturbed even as your fic, and none of those fascinated me as much either. This story was also the one that made me fall in love with the Tala/Kai pairing now I think of it.

So here are my apologies for not reviewing earlier, at that time I didn't think one anonymous review more or less would make that much of a difference but now that I'm updating a story of my own I realise how much one measly little line can mean to an author so that's why I'm currently haunting down stories that I liked to review them anyway, well better late than never right?

But the review box is doing that flickering thing which happens when a review is getting to long so I better stop here before my rambling really gets out of control.
So Anyway, great story and I wished there were more (horror)stories like this.
Keep up the magnifiscent work!
~*~
Silent Pandemonium.

WA i thought the last chapter was the last one o.o the 14, I was so excited to realize i was wrong! i so loved the ending, i'm scared of 'it' - not king's 'it' i can beat that one - but your 'it' and 'it' transforming onto Tala is just GREAT! i love this one! is one of my favorites! kai ended so wrong! and... well. dead...

please, keep up the good work.. and your other - cof breaking the rules cof cof - stories!!

This was an awesome story!! Once I started reading, I couldn't stop, I was that interested!! I wish I would have known about this story sooner, but I'm glad I found it after it was completed...I think if I had to wait for the updates it would have killed me just because this story is that awesome

I'm reviewing this on the second read because the first time I was listening to Hotel Persona and...erm...well, it wasn't entirely appropriate. o_O


However, I've done it right this time and I wanna thank you for such monumentally twisted ** of a story...and it's all coming full circle...this is perfect horror like I've never read horror. They're not easy to do, and I think you did it much justice. =D



I love Kai's little prison, I love how he's sick and twisted, and probably deserves what he got...but I love Tala more. I love his greed and his want. He's evil, in a spitefully playful way. It made me grin everytime I saw him play another person, more so as he gains more and more contol over Kai, despite letting him think he's exacting any kind of revenge for himself.


So yeah...it was a great ending.



Oh, and thanks for the shameless promotion in your A/N at the start. XD

col, like a horror movie.. liked how kai was actually dead..

update soon!!

Miako6

OMG it is so great! everybody was dead!!

:O Bloody hell...that was creepy!

But thats why i love this fic...i guess that makes me strange?

Oh well; it was marvelously written and i really enjoyed it so thanks for updating! XD

I keep losing track of how often I'm reviewing this =S But I am reviewing this chapter... Hm.

I feel that Kai is beginning to enjoy the sadistic sex... I really do.

Oh, no!! Kai can't shoot Tala =O Tala actually likes Kai! And he won't kill Kai!
Well... He might do. Eventually.
But he's not going to right now!!

Hahaha. Hiro died.
I'm not a big fan of Hiro.
XD

=O
So Kai was actually dead?!?!?! =O
Wow, that was unexpected =O

IT RETURNS!
=O

I can't wait for the last chapter =)

i loved it! every single chapter! ur awesome and so is this story! it's everything i like... twisted, dark, bloody...

i like the way kai and tala act and the fact they wanted to kill each other...

can't wait to read another chapter.

omg that's so sick.

...

write more. i love it.

Love the new chapter.
Cant wait to see what happens next.
I just love this story!!
I love the personality you made for both Kai and Tala.

Sex in a blood bath XD that's awesome. PLZ update soon =D

Sex in a beydish full of blood...not something i'd try but it's certainly interesting =]

Well this chapter was amazing like all the others; it was sick but in an awesome way!

Anyway...thanks for updating... chapter 13 on halloween

OMG they are having sex on blood!! that's twisted and great!

Nice and gory. xD I like the part about Tatyana. Stas sounds like a creep. He's terrible. =D But it was interesting to know that the bey dish was so big. Ah I feel sadistic now. xD